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First thing retconed: There is now an official map. True, it's not a map of the whole world, but I want to try to follow the show mildly faithfully.

Title: Vast (the prologue)
Chapter One: My Time
Focused Character: Celestia
Genre: De/Reconstruction/Drama/Fantasy. There might be more as the plot writes itself. I'm a parodist at heart, so do keep care of that.
Rating: If you are mature enough to tell the difference between reality and fiction, fan work versus original than I think you are old enough to read this.

Summary:
“Your mind cannot comprehend the true size of things. So you limit, place barriers. These barriers will weaken you...

But you will not live alone.”


Other WARNINGS: Blood/death to fictional characters is going to be a certainty at some point. I have never seen/watched the original MLPs. I will be filling plot holes/questions with ideas I know will never be the answers in the actual show due to some obvious circumstances. More than likely, this entire premise will be Jossed, but hopefully still fun for the both of us.

To those unfamiliar with my work- most of my stories tends to end in an open manner. If you like your stories to finish with everything concluded in an obvious manner I REALLY do not recommend reading this. Because of vagueness you are free to think what you want from this, just keep in mind it may be wrong.

AND FINALLY: If you see any terrible spelling/grammar/story telling/OOC-ness SAY SOMETHING. If you have ideas/questions share them. I might not use them but they help me take a step back and look at my work at another angle.

Constructive criticism is greeted in open arms. I'll try to make a decent updating schedule. otz *cries in a corner like the pathetic brony I am*

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Characters © Hasbro
Inspiration © Lauren Faust and the entire MLP:FiM team
Story/Comic © Lilithnanhart
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~yan-chan Apr 21, 2012
OMYGOD! I JUST LOVE THE WORLD!!!!

congrats for the great pic! ^^-
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Mood: Love ~JediSwordZAM Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been looking forward to this sense you first announced it. why am I only reading it now!

Anyway. Its good to see it start, and filly princesses are adorable. good luck with the rest!
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~Lilithnanhart Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Considering how bad my updates are probably going to be, it's probably for the best. XD

And thank you!
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~fatfan12345 Sep 18, 2011
well i liked the first one but i got to problems with this first of all that emotocon in the descrip is "TT_TT" which would mean the entity crying has for eyes's and secondly THE CLOCK AT THE BANK ONCE SAID ONE HUNDRED AND TEN DEGREES!!!
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~KeinZantezuken Sep 16, 2011
OOC-ness
But the whole concept and idea IS OOC. OOC as regarding to the MLP:FiM universe. You built your own setting on top of that, and this solid construction practically crushed the basis, the original.
*shrugs*
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~Lilithnanhart Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One can argue all fandom plots are OOC for the world, but what matters the most is Twilight still acts like Twilight, and Rarity is Rarity and so on. Otherwise there is no attachment.
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~KeinZantezuken Sep 16, 2011
*shrugs again*
You asked, I pointed.
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~Lilithnanhart Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's fine. Thank you just the same. ^^
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~ThePoeticPaladin Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Fuck.

Yes.

Been waiting for this. So hard.
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Mood: Love !KorvusKaiser Sep 14, 2011
And so it begins! I wish you the best of luck! :D
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